Anicetus Theron

[Anicetus Theron]

About the Roleplayer

Your name: Aaron

How long have you been RPing? almost a year so....7 months.

Where/How did you find us? searching for mythology actually.


The Basics

Name: Anicetus Theron

Age: 35

Type: Mortal

Gender: Male

Deity (if you want to play a non-Greek god): Greek,

Nationality: Spartan Only available for mortals

Powers: Only available for immortals

Occupation: Warrior, Soldier Only available for mortals


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Image of your character:

Celeb you're using: David Wenham

Physical Appearance: Anicetus is about 6 foot 4, he has blonde hair, and blue eyes. He is very muscular and definded. He has lots of scars but the one down his right eye is the most distinct. He has cauterized his wounds so he has alot of burn marks on his body. His right eye is almost white you can see the blue a little in there. He has a scar on his lip from being punched by Atius.


Feel the heartbeat

Personality Description: Hes not as gun - ho as most spartans hes a little more mello, in battle he is compleatly fearless. Hes nice to people who do not threaten him like on 300 when the black guy threatns Leonidas, he would do the same and kill them where they stand. He has a thing for wemon.

Likes: Wemon, Food, battle, Alchol in general, parties

Dislikes: Traitors, "False" gods

Strength: Well his strength hes very strong

Weaknesses: speed he lacks speed, beutiful wemon


Story of my Life

Spouse/Lover: None

Marital status: Single

Family: Atius Allectus

History: He grew up in Sparta trained like a spartan, but his mother just left him when he was young, so he grew up without a mother, his father was punised by the gods for being a traitor to the beloved home land. When he was 12 he was adopted by a man named Atius Allectus, he was taught no fear or pain. He became a Solider for sparta and is now a captian (and single! lol). Atius is pretty much his father he taught him everything.

Anicetus could be considered "noble" he has money and he lives in a nice place, but isnt driven on riches or class, honor and glory drives him. He wants to be famous and he just might get there if he keeps his act up. His parents are almost uknown to him his father was a feirce warrior but betrayed Sparta and was killed, his mother "left" when he was a boy but she was banished for being a whore. Anicetus loves to celebrate and party, he likes fun times rather than depression. He has also been told he has a son but that is not yet know to be true, just a rumor.

['HERA]

Hi Aaron, welcome to OT! *waves* ;D

OK, your app looks good, but there're things you should fix.

First of all, I'm not sure if Arley Voegeli is an Ancient Greek name. If you're confused what Ancient Greek name you should use, I recommend you look at this page: www.behindthename.com/nmc/gre-anci.php

You need to be more descriptive on your app, especially personality description (1 paragraph at least), physical appearance (1 paragraph), and history (1 - 2 paragraphs). And also on family section, state who Atius is.

Other than that it looks great, just need some edits and you'll be accepted

[Helios]

Alright another Aaron

['HERA]

True, I forgot to say that now we have to Aaron-s.

OK, your app looks better. I'm still not sure about the history. Maybe you should tell from how he was born, when, or where. The physical appearance still needs more description. 3 or 4 more sentences are enough.

Oh and I forgot to say that you also need to write the age

['HERA]